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grabbed you from behind then everything went black.


(A few hours later)
You woke up on a room that was not familiar to you 'a room huh?' you thought just then someone walked in to the room. 'who could that be' you thought 'oh it's that creepy guy form the woods wait that creepy guy from the woods!? KIDNAPER KEEP HIM AWAY FROM ME' you thought you opened your mouth to speak but nothing came out 'DANG IT WHY CAN'T I SAY ANYTHING!' you thought "I see your awake" he said "STAY AWAY FROM ME!" you Shouted "WHAT DID YOU SAY?!"  He shouted then a smirk grew across his face "looks like someone needs to learn a lesson on how to be nice to people who can over throw you in the blink of an eye!" he said
aaah scary turkey
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FallingintoOctober Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2011  Student General Artist
Grammar improvement is needed. The story is okay considering that you can spell, but a bit more practice will really help :)
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Ambymation Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
i do practice i help my older sister with spelling just as she helps me(a bit) with grammar
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:iconfallingintooctober:
FallingintoOctober Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2011  Student General Artist
Oh, okay. Just saying it needs improvement. Maybe you should consider getting one of your friends on DA to proof-read it before you publish it :)
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Ambymation Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
yeah I'll do that.
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PsychoWiccan Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
i love it.
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Ambymation Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Thankyou
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ZeroTheUnknow Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2011  Student General Artist
Really cool can't wait what nexts!!
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Ambymation Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
thanks
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