grabbed you from behind then everything went black.
(A few hours later)
You woke up on a room that was not familiar to you 'a room huh?' you thought just then someone walked in to the room. 'who could that be' you thought 'oh it's that creepy guy form the woods wait that creepy guy from the woods!? KIDNAPER KEEP HIM AWAY FROM ME' you thought you opened your mouth to speak but nothing came out 'DANG IT WHY CAN'T I SAY ANYTHING!' you thought "I see your awake" he said "STAY AWAY FROM ME!" you Shouted "WHAT DID YOU SAY?!" He shouted then a smirk grew across his face "looks like someone needs to learn a lesson on how to be nice to people who can over throw you in the blink of an eye!" he said
aaah scary turkey
Grammar improvement is needed. The story is okay considering that you can spell, but a bit more practice will really help
i do practice i help my older sister with spelling just as she helps me(a bit) with grammar
i love it.
Really cool can't wait what nexts!!